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How Journaling Helps Me

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October 11, 2017 By Jennifer Lambert 18 Comments

I’m not into planners with all the stickers and the colored pens and the frills and stuff. It just seems like a big waste of my time.

But I frequently do informal journaling. I don’t feel the pressure to draw in a smashbook or place any stickers in a planner. Having something fancy is just overwhelming.

Journaling is a great way to be cognitive of little successes.

I’m always writing.

I keep a food and exercise journal on my smartphone.

I make notes for future blog posts in several places.

But this past year, and especially this past winter, I’ve gotten lazy and sedentary.

Some days, I look back and it feels like I did virtually nothing.

I recently began journaling my days to realize how much I do accomplish.

I don’t write down every little bitty thing, but I sketch out my day so I can look back and see what I did, because some days, it feels like I just watched Netflix all day.

I have just plain little spiral notebooks for my daily journal.

I read and write a lot.

And sometimes, it feels like I spend most of my time in the kitchen – prepping, cooking, and cleaning.

I was sick for a week, so I didn’t actually do so much. I needed to really rest and recharge. There wasn’t much to write about.

Then, I got back into gear.

Most of these aren’t great accomplishments by most standards, but they help me to feel better about how I spend my days.

I try to be peaceful and use my time wisely.

I don’t like to be busy or rushing. I like to move in easy rhythms with the seasons and holidays.

I love the daily examen from St. Ignatius:

1. Become aware of God’s presence.
2. Review the day with gratitude.
3. Pay attention to your emotions.
4. Choose one feature of the day and focus prayer around it.
5. Look toward tomorrow.

Download an Examen prayer card here.

I have some simple daily goals:

I want to read, exercise, complete lessons and read alouds and Bible study with my kids.

I also have a prayer journal.

I write scripture every day with monthly themed plans from Sweet Blessings.

I write prayers and praises – with dates so I can go back and look at it.

I write my exercises and travel experiences.

I recently got a recipe journal to track our favorite meals since I always tweak the recipes and forget.

Journaling is a great way to relax and keep track of events, milestones, thoughts, dreams…

Make a list of things you do every day.

Make a list of things that make you happy.

Compare the lists.

Adjust accordingly.

How journaling helps me:

  • Stress relief – it helps me to stay peaceful.
  • Personal growth – it helps me to learn about myself.
  • Helps clarify my thoughts and emotions – it helps me to work out issues with my past and present.
  • Problem solving – it helps me to be metacognitive.
  • Purge emotions – I can write about troublesome issues privately.

A Baker’s Dozen Reasons to Journal:

  1. Exercise log
  2. Foods you’ve eaten, especially to rule out allergies or sensitivities, or to save favorite recipes
  3. Quotes you love
  4. Travel
  5. Art
  6. Nature
  7. Poetry
  8. Books you’ve read or want to read
  9. Movies you’ve watched or want to watch
  10. Memories
  11. Wines or beers you’ve loved
  12. Daybook or daily log
  13. Prayer and/or Scripture

Do you journal? How does it help you?


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How to Write an Essay

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March 8, 2017 By Jennifer Lambert 11 Comments

When I entered university, I didn’t know how to write the typical 5-paragraph essay.

I vaguely remembered writing a literary research paper in 9th and again in 10th grade, with much hand-holding from the teacher, but I had a substitute teacher for my 11th and 12th grade years, so I basically sat in the back corner, by the window, and read poetry and classic novels. I started college early to escape.

In my second year or college, my Shakespeare professor kindly took me under his wing and tutored me in the essay format and I then took off with it, easily earning A’s in all my English courses.

I majored in literature, which was kind of a cop out and didn’t enable me to explore too many career options. I entered a 15-month master’s program to earn my M.Ed. and then I taught high school English for a few years. I moved on to teach college writing until we moved out of state and I had my babies.

Now I homeschool my four children. I don’t encourage formal writing until my kids are high school age. I don’t place a huge focus on typical English education. We read a lot and have lively discussions.

Essays are a bit more than a series of paragraphs thrown together. I explain the necessary parts of a well-written paragraph here.

Types of essays:

  • Expository essays
  • Descriptive essays
  • Narrative essays
  • Argumentative (Persuasive) essays

Most college essays require research and source citations. Different disciplines require different styles. I typically used MLA since I worked with literature. I love how easy these websites make generating source citations!

Citation Styles:

  • MLA
  • APA
  • Chicago

How to write an essay:

When I taught writing as a school teacher, I used to begin by pulling out an adorable copy of The Three Little Pigs and reading it aloud to the class.

Middle school, high school, college level. The students loved it and giggled, excited to be swept back to preschool storytime days.

It’s a well-known story, familiar and comfortable, so it takes the scary out of essay-writing when it’s so simplified.

After reading the book, I wrote on the board the outline format of the story.

The Three Little Pigs is a perfect 5-paragraph essay!

I. Introduction
II. Straw Pig
III. Stick Pig
IV. Brick Pig
V. Conclusion

Then, we would summarize the story together and I would jot down details on the outline.

Download a worksheet for summarizing The Three Little Pigs here.

Since I had to give grades and busy work to students in middle school and high school, I would assign them to quickly write up the summary in 5-paragraph format.

Then, we would segue into writing 5-paragraph essays on a variety of topics, working up to the dreaded literary analysis essay with citations and sources and references.

I like this handy dandy visual:

Review the format of a 5-paragraph essay:

  1. Determine a thesis.
    This is a statement that serves as the premise to be maintained or proved throughout the essay.
    When I teach essay writing to new writers, I make the formula easy: State the argument including the 3 supporting statements. Place the thesis at the end of the introduction paragraph.
  2. At least 3 supporting statements.
    These three statements become the three body paragraphs. I typically require a resource quote for each paragraph.
  3. Introduction paragraph.
    The introductory paragraph attempts to accomplish these three things:
    • Introduce the topic with some indication of its inherent interest or importance, and a clear definition of the boundaries of the subject area
    • Indicate the structure and/or methodology of the essay, often with the major sections of the essay or its structural principle clearly stated
    • State the thesis of the essay, preferably in a single, arguable statement with a clear main clause
  4. Conclusion paragraph.
    A conclusion paragraph attempts to accomplish these three things:
    • It provides the reader with a sense of closure on the topic
    • It demonstrates to the reader that you accomplished what you set out to do
    • It shows how you have proved your thesis
  5. Works Cited page.
    This is a formatted list of research sources on a separate page after the essay. Many teachers and professors are very particular about spacing and punctuation.

Thesis Examples:

The three little pigs thwarted the big, bad wolf.
Albrecht Durer as a Reformation artist utilized color, symbolism, and secular subjects in his art to express the Protestant values of his peers.
Alice Walker coined the term “Womanism” to unify strong women of color, give them a voice, and differentiate from the more white Feminist ideals.

Tips:

Eliminate “to be” verbs. In data processing programs, search for these and replace with active verbs.
Do not use “you” or “I.”
No slang.
No contractions.
Wikipedia is not a credible source.
Use 1 quote per body paragraph. Make sure to introduce it and support it. Place it in the middle of the paragraph.

Teaching and writing essays shouldn’t be frightening. It’s easy when you follow a formula.

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How to Write a Paragraph

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September 15, 2016 By Jennifer Lambert 12 Comments

I have taught writing for many years – to middle schoolers, high schoolers, and college level. I was a writing and English tutor for also – to both public school students and homeschoolers.

We don’t use a writing curriculum in our homeschool because I am confident in my teaching methods.

We have reviewed IEW and it’s a good program. We’ve used workbooks, monthly calendar journal topics, and scripted curricula to see if it would help or interest my kids with writing.

I found most of it was worthless busy work.

We do lots of informal writing in journals and notebooking pages from preschool on. When left alone, kids love to write, mimicking their parents, elder siblings, anyone they see writing regularly. I keep regular prayer journals and we love notebooking.

I don’t teach English.

I never pressure my kids to write. I only encourage them to write formally in high school.

The early years are for the gathering of facts, memorizing, filling the empty bucket with so much knowledge, stored for use later on. These are the grammar years and we focus on play, experiential learning, basics of reading, writing, and math. Exploring with science and history and art and music and great literature. Journaling is more for handwriting practice with copywork, memorization, and fact recording. Form and quality is more important than quantity.

The middle years are for making connections with all that knowledge stored away. Grammar rules begin to make sense. I love to see the beginnings of self-correction in their behavior. The understanding of relationships among people, events, and experiences help with the overall comprehension of history, science, the arts, and literature. We continue to explore the world around us and journal about it more purposefully. I limit anxiety by eliminating grades – and correction unless asked. I begin teaching good writing methods, like eliminating slang, contractions, and filler phrases sucah as “needless to say.” I address indenting and correct pronunciation. Reader notebooks are a great way to interact with books and begin to synthesize with reading.

The upper years are for synthesis with the knowledge and connections. This is when abstract thinking comes into play. There’s no sense wasting time forcing kids to learn to write when they still can only think concretely. Sure, they can memorize the methods, but the magic is lost. Waiting until high school to encourage writing is so much more fulfilling. We work on analyzing literature, history, psychology, sociology – comparing and contrasting, research and criticism.

How to Write a Paragraph

Here is a PDF file of my Paragraph Instruction outline.

I have used this paragraph outline with my own children, middle schoolers, high schoolers, and college level students.

The best way to learn how to write is to practice.

I don’t expect the same quality paragraph from an elementary student that I do from an 8th grader. I expect more from college students than I do high schoolers. But the difference lies mainly in complexity and vocabulary. The format is the same across the board.

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Building a Better Vocabulary

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March 11, 2015 By Jennifer Lambert 1 Comment

Having a high schooler means that I have to get real intentional about vocabulary building.

It’s a lot of newness with grades and schedules, and teaching her to budget her time well. We have to make lists and check off the assignments and stay on task. We’re not used to having to be so diligent keeping track and recording.

I am blessed to have four children who love reading and words as much as I do. My husband complains there is never anywhere for him to sit because every surface is covered in books.

I don’t see the problem.

5 Tools for Vocabulary Building

5 Tools for Vocabulary Building

Reading and writing are the best tools to building a strong vocabulary. But sometimes we need a little help.

1. 30 Days to a More Powerful Vocabulary

30 Days to a More Powerful Vocabulary is a great little book that helps with test scores and cramming vocabulary in that style. I used it when I taught study skills and test taking tips and my husband and I used it to refresh for grad school entrance exams.

2. Reader Notebook

Keeping a reading writing notebook makes my daughter own her vocabulary lists. Ideally, she jots down words in the quotes as she reads literature and looks up definitions to keep a running list. Sometimes it’s an archaic word or a term in a new context, but this helps her be responsible for learning. With the Kindle app on her iPad, it’s often instantaneous to learn definitions and she gets lazy, but she’s only cheating herself. She loves adding Notebooking Pages to her reading writing notebook. She uses it for all her literature reading.

3. Reader’s Digest Word Power

My father and I have been competing for decades on the Reader’s Digest Word Power quizzes and I am so pleased that my kids are now joining in the competition.

4. Word of the Day

When I was a teen, my parents bought me a Word of the Day tear-off desk calendar. I loved that thing. My kids now love to check the word of the day app every morning.

5. Spelling Workout

Spelling Workout 2001/2002 Level H Student Edition

My kids love Spelling Workout for quick and fun vocabulary lessons. I love the various activities in each lesson – prefixes and suffixes, analogies, synonyms and antonyms, dictation, editing, freewriting exercises, puzzles, riddles, and more. Books recommended for grades 1-8.

These are fun vocabulary building tools for the whole family to learn new vocabulary.

It can be a challenge to try to fit those new words into regular conversation throughout the day. We have done copywork in the past, but I think that just focuses on good penmanship. I love to work with my kids and these vocabulary builders have assisted our kids increase their word count. I am blessed that we have strong readers and they all love words and learning how to use them well.

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Great Books for Writers

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February 4, 2015 By Jennifer Lambert 12 Comments

Many of my friends are writers and bloggers.

My daughter is growing into a writer and artist.

NaNoWriMo is great for kids and young writers! We are including a creative writing credit on her homeschool high school transcript.

It’s sometimes helpful to read from successful writers – a pep talk, how they became successful, or just their fun biography.

Sometimes we suffer from writer’s block and need inspiration to keep going. We never, ever call this procrastinating. It’s research!

I love this Writer’s Prayer:

Oh Lord, let me not be one of those who writes too much;
who spreads himself too thinly with his words,
diluting all the things he has to say,
like butter spread too thinly over toast,
or watered milk in some worn-out hotel;
but let me write the things I have to say,
and then be silent, ’til I need to speak.
Oh Lord, let me not be one of those who writes too little;
a decade-man between each tale, or more,
where every word accrues significance
and dread replaces joy upon the page.
Perfectionists like chasing the horizon;
You kept perfection, gave the rest to us,
so let me earn the wisdom to move on.
But over and above those two mad spectres of parsimony and profligacy,
Lord, let me be brave, and let me, while I craft my tales, be wise:
let me say true things in a voice that is true,
and, with the truth in mind, let me write lies.

~Neil Gaiman (listen to him read it here)

My TOP 10 favorite books for writers:

1. On Writing: A Memoir Of The Craft by Stephen King

I love the humor and real life stories. It’s always fun to know the beginnings of a famour writer and how he came to success.

2. You Are a Writer by Jeff Goins

Great inspirational calls to action. These books make you want to be a better person and not just a better writer.

3. Bird by Bird: Some Instructions on Writing and Life by Anne Lamott

Raw, intelligent, realistic writing advice mingled with poignant stories of her life.

4. The Elements of Style, Annotated and Updated for Present-Day Use by William Strunk, Jr.

Every writer needs to know this stuff. Period.

5. Conversations with a Writing Coach by Susan May Warren

Easy to follow advice with an actionable plan to write a novel.

6. Walking on Water: Reflections on Faith and Art by Madeleine L’Engle

Great thoughts on being a Christian artist.

7. Writing Down the Bones: Freeing the Writer Within by Natalie Goldberg

Great exercises on writing and how to live life to the fullest, based on her writing courses.

8. On Writing Well: The Classic Guide to Writing by William Zinsser

How to write nonfiction well.

9. Zen in the Art of Writing: Essays on Creativity by Ray Bradbury

It’s by Ray Bradbury. Need I say more?

10. The War of Art: Break Through the Blocks and Win Your Inner Creative Battles by Steven Pressfield (all his books are great!)

Succeed despite all the Resistance.

11. Writing to Change the World: An Inspiring Guide for Transforming the World with Words by Mary Pipher

Words are the most powerful tools at our disposal. With them, writers have saved lives and taken them, brought justice and confounded it, started wars and ended them. Writers can change the way we think and transform our definitions of right and wrong.

Writing to Change the World is a beautiful paean to the transformative power of words. Encapsulating Mary Pipher’s years as a writer and therapist, it features rousing commentary, personal anecdotes, memorable quotations, and stories of writers who have helped reshape society. It is a book that will shake up readers’ beliefs, expand their minds, and possibly even inspire them to make their own mark on the world.

12. The Artist’s Way by Julia Cameron

Julia Cameron takes readers on an amazing twelve-week journey to discover the inextricable link between their spiritual and creative selves. This groundbreaking program includes:

– Introductions to two of Cameron’s most vital tools for creative recovery–The Morning Pages and The Artist Date
– Hundreds of highly effective exercises and activities
– Guidance on starting a “Creative Cluster” of fellow artists who will support you in your creative endeavors

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I Don’t Want to Be a Christian Blogger

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June 9, 2014 By Jennifer Lambert 11 Comments

I am a blogger.

I love Jesus.

But I don’t want to be considered a Christian Blogger.

Within the blogging realm and Christian world, there are just too many pressures to name.

I am always learning new strategy for blogging. I refuse to compromise my principles. I am always honing my worldview and I want to learn as much as I can about everything so I can live well for Jesus.

People take offense to everything. There’s always someone getting her panties in a wad over something.

Everyone loves labels.

Christian. Blogger. Wife. Mom. Homeschooler. Daughter. Military spouse.

I get it. It makes lots of people comfortable to file everyone away into safe little cubby-holes.

There are oodles of Christian blogger groups on Facebook and Google+. I quit them all. So much judgmentalism.

I just want to be me.

And why, oh why, does it ever have to be about denomination?

I often gloss over topics I post, too scared to write what I really think and feel, too worried about offending. Those who know me in real life certainly know I rarely open my mouth without absolute truth flowing free.

I am me.

I spent almost thirty years changing myself so people would like me.

It was exhausting. Two failed marriages. Countless broken friendships. So much heartache.

I was consumed with trying to be who I thought society wanted me to be.

But eventually, I started listening to that still small voice and it started drowning out the lies I’d been hearing.

I don’t fit into a neat little box.

My pastor’s wife once showed surprise that I had not been raised as a Christian. I started attending church quite late in my 20s. It was still a very rocky and long road to learn to learn to become a godly wife and parent.

I wonder why she was surprised though? Am I so complacent in my faith walk that it seemed like I had never strayed? Or am I too good at covering up my past filthy sinful life?

I suppose it was a compliment – but I don’t receive those well and overanalyzed it, as usual.

A bloggy friend of mine recently expressed that blogging is exhausting. She recently got two email replies to the same newsletter:

1) the reader demanding to be removed from the email list due to a difference in faith opinion

and

2) a praise to the high heavens and thanking her for her writing.

I can’t please everyone all the time and I shouldn’t even try.

I just need to be who God made me to be. I need to write what God places on my heart, however hard it is sometimes.

Sometimes I use bad language. I drink wine and beer and sometimes even a mixed drink. I yell at my kids when they act stupid. Sometimes I holler at them when I’m tired and/or frustrated. I get mad at my husband for dumb stuff. I watch horror movies. My teen daughters watch horror shows and movies. I am often ashamed of myself.

I’m not perfect.

But I am forgiven.

I shouldn’t feel obligated to confess or apologize to you unless I personally sin against you. But I lie awake at night worrying about social media and the blog and if you like me. And you don’t even know me.

You only know what I allow you to see.

I’m not one to spout Bible verses on Facebook because I know how that can hurt when people don’t understand.

I read all sorts of blogs with all sorts of different topics. They are all good but many would be probably offensive to most of you. So I seldom share them.

“Behold, I send you out as sheep in the midst of wolves. Therefore be wise as serpents and harmless as doves. Matthew 10:16

I like to know what’s going on in the world and I want to view many different opinions before I make a decision. I don’t want to be biased. Many Christians are so very narrow-minded. I’m raising my children to be aware of the world with its evils and wonders. I want our family to be courteous and respectful, but not ignorant.

I want us to seek good and always be delighted when we find it.

I know many, many Christians who run the gamut and totally blast any stereotypes out of the water.

Blue hair and liberal politics. Essential oils, herbs, babywearing, and nursing until the kid is five. Skirt-wearing, conservative, homesteading. Keeping the Torah laws. Large family, no TV, hymn-singing, no make-up. Only child, special needs, living in an RV. Praying through all circumstances on faith, no debt, living on a prayer. Bohemian, living in the margins of society, tattoos, piercings. Cleavage showing, cropped bleached hair, blended family, adopted kids of all shades from all over the world. Fat, voluptuous, skinny. Pushing a cutting edge trend or ultra conservative. Black, brown, white. Working moms, SAHMs, WAHMs, bloggers, writers, teachers, homeschoolers…

It’s all war.

Does it really matter?

If I wear makeup or watch TV or blog in the nude (I don’t, but you’d never know!), why do you care?

Do my personal choices infringe on your family discipleship plans? Then don’t read it. Keep scrolling.

Does it matter what I do if I have love? Because I don’t think it matters so much what you do, as long as you love others. The little things are between you and God. And perhaps your husband and children and certain family and friends. It’s all really about relationships.

When Christian bloggers have to crowdsource whether they should attend a sibling’s gay wedding, I think they may have missed the big picture. When judging occurs at the expense of love, that’s a problem. She asked for permission to sever a close relationship. And she received a resounding YES from other Christians!

This is why I no longer write for other blogs.

I recently saw an ad to a conference “for successful Christian bloggers.”

I wonder what they consider “success.” Success in the world? Or in God’s kingdom? Because they are two totally different things and they constantly war within me as I struggle with setting boundaries and standards for my online presence without selling my soul – and yet this is more than a ministry. It is a lil business.

Bloggers seems to have a whole lot of influence, and marketers capitalize on this by offering products and services for review. I’m tempted all the time to get something for free, even if I know it doesn’t suit my family or it may compromise my values. And yet I see bloggers with reviews on their blogs for all these crazy things, and I just wonder: what is it that’s important to them? What are their values and boundaries?

As a lover of Jesus, I am called to be “not of this world.” I’m already thinking ahead. I’m trying to live now like it should be. On earth as it is in heaven. In the now.

 If you were of the world, the world would love you as its own; but because you are not of the world, but I chose you out of the world, therefore the world hates you. John 15:19

I am no expert at anything.

So many Christians are in “the first part of their lives” and rely on rules and legalism…yet they never make it to “the second part” of spiritual maturity with unconditional love and the fruit of the Spirit. They know the Bible and spout verses to represent exclusivity. They miss the point of unconditional love and what Jesus teaches.

I seldom attend church. Are you shocked?

Before you get your Bible verse weapons ready, ask yourself: who taught you what you think believe?

I no longer use the term Christian or evangelical. Those words just mean hate these days.

I love Jesus.

I don’t want to be a Christian blogger.

I just want to write.

I love it when people comment that my views and experiences help them.

Walking on water.



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IEW Student Writing Intensive Review

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July 5, 2013 By Jennifer Lambert 1 Comment

I jumped at the chance to review for Institute for Excellence in Writing since I’ve heard so many great things about it.

I requested both Teaching Writing with Structure and Style Set (TWSS) and Student Writing Intensive Level B Set (SWI) for myself and my daughter.

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Since I was an English teacher, I kinda felt like a failure having to get a writing curriculum.

I had signed Liz up for SWI Level A a couple years ago at our local co-op…and we loathed it. Every Wednesday night was a battle trying to make sure she had her papers in order. She didn’t understand her homework and couldn’t answer any of my questions about the assignments. The mom who “taught” the class couldn’t explain anything to my satisfaction either. She hadn’t watched the TWSS.

I knew somebody had to be missing something.

So I watched the TWSS DVDs and it all became crystal clear. That co-op had obviously not encouraged anyone to view the TWSS.

A few of my favorite takeaways:

“This is a skills-based program, not a product-based program, not a formula for perfection. Wrestling with words gives more writing power.” Andrew Pudewa in TWSS

“You can’t correct everything all at once.” Yes. Thank you. I need to remember this! And remind my husband. And focus on mini-lessons as needed.

He “will not try to challenge my comma doctrine.” lol!

Also, I like all the comparisons of teaching writing with Suzuki music method. Made good sense.

So, the DVDs show why he teaches writing this way. I do not disagree with it. It’s just very different than the way I do it. I respect Andrew Pudewa as a teacher of writing. He’s good at what he does. My kids understand. The End.

How we used the student program:

My daughter watched the IEW B DVDs and followed the lesson format. I was in the room most of the time, listening in to how he taught the lessons. She enjoyed it so much, she did almost a lesson a day! After the DVDs, she continued to do the lessons on her own. I expect to see even more improvement across the curriculum with her writing.

The SWI has 15 lessons with lesson plans, handouts, and reinforcement materials (found in binder). The extra CD has an overview of TWSS. The lessons are easy to follow and Liz could do them without my interference. She showed me her completed essays. All was good. She was learning. She was writing.

I like the outline and schedule examples in TWSS. One of the issues with our first time around was solved for us: it doesn’t have to be perfect and she can be creative.

She knows how to summarize and she likes to embellish and the dress-ups, sentence openers, decorations, and sentence styles are good solid teaching. She knows the “proper” names for most grammar, but she likes the fun way it’s taught in SWI.

I like the “wall charts” and we downloaded this free app to help remind us. And yay for no printables.

~IEW Writing Tools – Institute for Excellence in Writing~

My daughter loved Mr. Pudewa’s humor and giggled through most of the watching.

The checklists are helpful to remind students to include everything in the assignments.

I’m happy that she was so agreeable and liked the assignments. I think the DVDs really helped with a different perspective.

IEW

How I used the TWSS program:

I’ve taught writing, grammar, and literature for many years in many different school environments. This program doesn’t disagree with any of the methods I’ve always used. Some lessons it simplifies and some topics it focuses more on with different terminology or format.

There are 9 units in the program (in a cool flow chart!):

  1. note making and outlines
  2. summarizing from notes
  3. narrative
  4. reference and library reports
  5. writing from pictures (we love doing this!)
  6. (library reports)
  7. creative
  8. essay
  9. critiques

Structure is rigid; style is fluid.

Per the TWSS recommendation, I moved the girls’ desks away from the wall so I could use the little whiteboard and teach more effectively. I seldom lecture the kids, but it’s good minilesson demonstrations.

graphic organizing

So, I tested some of the theories with a writing lesson. My middle girls are young. I don’t encourage formal writing until high school.

Our first keyword lesson on the platypus.

This is for the topic sentence:

description

A fun little printable I found somewhere with topic and supporting sentences to sort.

paragraph construction

The girls sorted the sentences in order.

paragraph puzzle

More keywords for the whole paragraph:

key words

The girls rewrote the sentences from their keywords.

paragraph

The girls wrote their first essays!

I am so proud. They really like this method!

Look at proud Tori with her first essay!

The girls presented their essays to Dad and practiced public speaking!

I like the suggestion in TWSS of using keywords for public speaking.

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Student Writing Intensive Level B (Grades 6-8) is $109

Contains
• Structure & Style Overview DVD for parents and teachers
• Four instructional DVDs for the student
• Three-ring binder with dividers
• Student packet containing scope & sequence, teacher’s notes, and student handouts for one student (about 100 pages in all)

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Teaching Writing: Structure & Style DVD Seminar with Seminar Workbook for levels A, B, and C is $169

Contains

  • 10 DVDs:
    • Six DVDs with instruction on the nine structural models and multiple stylistic techniques (10 hours total viewing time—may be watched all at once, or viewed one disc at a time throughout the school year)
    • Tips & Tricks for Teaching Through the Nine Units, a two hour supplemental DVD refresher course
    • Three DVDs of sample student workshops at three different grade levels to help you with that first lesson
  • The TWSS Seminar Workbook, which serves as the syllabus for the seminar and contains charts, word lists, sample lesson plans, and more!

Check out these free downloads!

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Balancing Blogging and Mothering

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February 12, 2013 By Jennifer Lambert 1 Comment

You’re probably a lot like I am, struggling to balance that blogging and mothering scale.

Some days, blogging just has to go right out the window when crises hit home with various needs of homeschooling, cooking, cleaning, helping my husband, or other activities that fall within my wide sphere of duty.

Christin Slade writes to us in her new book Blog at Home Mom about finding that delicate balance within blogging and mothering. She too is a homeschool mom and a very successful blogger at Blog at Home Mom.

Christin encourages us as mothers and bloggers and lays out a plan to prioritize blogging and mothering so our lives are successful and point to Christ as the head of our homes and lives.

This book was like the permission I needed to let it go and prioritize my mothering and other duties. Blogging on the side. God in control. If I’m successful, He gets the glory, because my family should come first.

I’m not one of those bloggers who has family nearby. I don’t rely on people to babysit my kids so I can work. We are all in the thick of it, all day and every day. I fit in my work in between laundry, meal-planning, cooking, cleaning, homeschooling, and rushing kids to soccer, gymnastics, music lessons, play rehearsals, Civil Air Patrol. And I struggle to make time for my husband. I struggle to relax and fit in fun. I don’t feel I have time to watch a show or read a frivolous book. If I have any down-time, I need to go, go, go! Time to work!

This isn’t a healthy attitude. I need balance.

We all need a little encouragement and a gentle reminder to set goals to ensure our testimony as successful Christian mothers and bloggers.

I loved reading this and I’m sure you will too!

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